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You Make Me Smile WIP

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Sick of not being able to draw convincing anime XD I decided 'screw it' and finally just put them into my own style.

I'm actually pretty pleased with the outcome ^^ they still kinda look like them!

And I'm incapable of drawing Ash without Pikachu (it's like Shaggy without Scooby damnit!!!)

WIP, so if I'm gonna color this crappy thing, I need you guys to tell me what's wrong with it first.


Characters (c) Satoshi Tajiri
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Almost a month old and I haven't written anything yet! Shame on me XD Okey, so I'll start with the things you could change...

As someone said in the comments; Misty's hair could be redrawn. A bit thicker, a bit higher up, but I think it would be even better if you did the base of the ponytail a bit out from the skull, so you can see the thickness of the hair on the scalp too, as with real hair, instead of her manga-style self.
The fingers on Misty's left hand could also be a bit bend, so they go over the Ash's collarbone.
Last thingwith Misty; I still think her legs looks unnatural thin compared to her hips and Ash's legs.

Otherwise, I think it's perfect. I still can't stop staring at Pikachu and go "Aw"! And Misty's righthand looks so natural and lovely! If they ever would do a Pokemon MMORPG, I would soooooo buy an account XD